Sometimes silence is better than any question, especially when dealing with someone high-strung and impatient. I like how the middle of the page turned out -- changing the look of the eye (such as adding the bottom lid) was kind of scary but ultimately the right way to go with the large panel. If I was a better artist, I'd draw all the eyes that way...

Oh, and in other news, I received my first review today. The overall response was basically "meh" -- the writing's good but the art sucks. So, as you can imagine, I'm feeling a little low right now. If you want my full thoughts on it, feel free to read this, but be warned -- it does contain quite a bit of whining.